Knocked off the draft.
It begged to die,
bludgeoned with a blunt instrument
at the hands of a serial offender
looking for ways
to dismember its body,
decompose,
pick over its bones.
(This is why I write novels, not poetry)
Sunday, November 30, 2008
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3 comments:
Nice piece of bloggerel!
Congratulations on finishing off the draft!
:-)
Far out! Vanda were you the sort who always got class assignments in on time? Aren't you marvellous he way you stick at it? I wish I had your app-lica-tion.
Always was a girly-swot, Mary. Still am.
Had half a day off, now am getting stuck into the next draft - the threat of school holidays looming and kids home from school for 6 weeks is quite motivating!
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